"The doll", for Bcat
Jun. 15th, 2011 03:53 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
andysssA special gift for
Bcat birthday. I think, her birthday is tomorrow, on deviantart. I don't know if it's her real birthday XD but...I wanted make it...a fanfiction...with her idea...
This idea is born in deviantart. I encourage you to visit Bcat's gallery...
She has lot of good ideas XD
I know, I know...I have already spoken about her in a precedent post.
It's my first fanfiction in english. I wrote in my maternal langage, french, and then in english. I used simple langage, for a best undestanding. I hope it's good.
I think, these fanfic is a three shots. I will post a chapter today, tomorrow, and the next day...
(a little preview. Go to see the real picture. Click on it)
First Chapter
The elder son of king was arrogant. He was also cruel as beautiful, and nobody dared to challenge him, because he was very powerful.
One day, a strolling players went to the capital. It consisted of several artists and strange creatures. A mysterious magician with blue hair as at night managed it.
Intrigued, trying to avoid his boredom, the prince, which was called Rasiel, invited the entertainers in his castle and their ordered to amuse him, as well as his court.
The show took place without problem. The public laughed and applauded, but the future monarch profoundly seemed to be bored.
It is then that the illusionist came on stage.
" My name is Mukuro Rokudo, and this evening, I am going to present you my quite new creation. Something unpublished which will delight your eyes and will make capsize your hearts. "
He shook his cape covered with cabalistic signs, and a box appeared below.
It was made in an unknown, black and brilliant material.
The magician looked intensely
- Sir, please approach, I ask you !
Grudgingly, prince Rasiel joined Mukuro Rokudo on the platform. This one indicated her the handle allowing to open the box.
The blond put the hand above and pulled.
Inside, there was a doll.
The prince grimaced but detailed it more attentively.
She had the so white skin as we would have said about some chinese porcelain. Her hair were of a strange green. She had the closed eyelids.
- What this?, asked Rasiel, dissatisfied.
Suddenly, the doll opened eyes.
Bcat birthday. I think, her birthday is tomorrow, on deviantart. I don't know if it's her real birthday XD but...I wanted make it...a fanfiction...with her idea...
This idea is born in deviantart. I encourage you to visit Bcat's gallery...
She has lot of good ideas XDI know, I know...I have already spoken about her in a precedent post.
It's my first fanfiction in english. I wrote in my maternal langage, french, and then in english. I used simple langage, for a best undestanding. I hope it's good.
I think, these fanfic is a three shots. I will post a chapter today, tomorrow, and the next day...
(a little preview. Go to see the real picture. Click on it)
First Chapter
The elder son of king was arrogant. He was also cruel as beautiful, and nobody dared to challenge him, because he was very powerful.
One day, a strolling players went to the capital. It consisted of several artists and strange creatures. A mysterious magician with blue hair as at night managed it.
Intrigued, trying to avoid his boredom, the prince, which was called Rasiel, invited the entertainers in his castle and their ordered to amuse him, as well as his court.
The show took place without problem. The public laughed and applauded, but the future monarch profoundly seemed to be bored.
It is then that the illusionist came on stage.
" My name is Mukuro Rokudo, and this evening, I am going to present you my quite new creation. Something unpublished which will delight your eyes and will make capsize your hearts. "
He shook his cape covered with cabalistic signs, and a box appeared below.
It was made in an unknown, black and brilliant material.
The magician looked intensely
- Sir, please approach, I ask you !
Grudgingly, prince Rasiel joined Mukuro Rokudo on the platform. This one indicated her the handle allowing to open the box.
The blond put the hand above and pulled.
Inside, there was a doll.
The prince grimaced but detailed it more attentively.
She had the so white skin as we would have said about some chinese porcelain. Her hair were of a strange green. She had the closed eyelids.
- What this?, asked Rasiel, dissatisfied.
Suddenly, the doll opened eyes.
